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jean
jean
26 days ago

One of my favorites. Love the haunting “coo”.

ghostsniper
ghostsniper
26 days ago

I seen this somewhere and thought it was clever:

Nuttin’yahoo

ghostsniper
ghostsniper
26 days ago

Cold wind bites the skin no escape
Shadows creeping whisper my name
Chains of despair drag me deep
Underneath where no light can creep

ghostsniper
ghostsniper
26 days ago
Reply to  ghostsniper

Rusted walls closing in too tight
Echoes scream in the dead of night
Cursed by the weight of what I’ve done
Falling deeper nowhere to run

jean
jean
26 days ago
Reply to  ghostsniper

and you say you’re not a fan of poetry ? ..humph.

ghostsniper
ghostsniper
26 days ago
Reply to  jean

It’s a song I wrote recently. It starts with the acoustic guitar (usually) then goes in various directions. Once I have the chord progression established I start on the lyrics. I’ve written hundreds and always have at least half a dozen in the pipeline.

Last edited 26 days ago by ghostsniper
jean
jean
25 days ago
Reply to  ghostsniper

Songs are poems, gs.

ghostsniper
ghostsniper
26 days ago
Reply to  ghostsniper

[Chorus]
Tear it open let it bleed
Scream the truth I can’t concede
Burn the lies consume the ash
Rise again from the devil’s wrath

ghostsniper
ghostsniper
25 days ago
Reply to  ghostsniper

Bloodshot eyes staring at the void
Faith destroyed anger deployed
Cracked mirrors show a shattered soul
Hollow heart devoured whole

[Bridge]
Fingers clawing at a broken door
Can’t go back to what was before
Spirits wail in a fiery tide
Drag me down no place to hide

[Chorus]
Tear it open let it bleed
Scream the truth I can’t concede
Burn the lies consume the ash
Rise again from the devil’s wrath

Walt Gottesman
Walt Gottesman
26 days ago

Thanks for the photo DT. Reminds me of one of the Haikus I wrote when I was bedridden with Lyme Disease a few years ago:

Dawn. Mourning doves coo.
Soft lamentation chorus
Calls me from my dream.

A poem would come to mind when I woke up each morning. That went on almost every day for months. Nothing like that had ever happened to me before…nor has it since.

There’s power in your verse Ghost.

“..humpf” indeed Jean!

jean
jean
25 days ago
Reply to  Walt Gottesman

Beautiful haiku, Walt. Bet there are more waiting for you to find them.

Walt Gottesman
Walt Gottesman
25 days ago
Reply to  jean

Thanks Jean!

jd
jd
25 days ago

Beautiful photo, DT. Nothing like birds to highlight God’s creations. We live near a boat-launch and walk there most days. Last year there were 2 families of geese, one with 10 goslings and the second with 6. This year they’ve outdone themselves, too many to count.